Help With Anatomy Please (Human)

[Jasper Sable]

Alright, so I was trying to at the very _least_ get a profile shot done of my Rp character, Setmi.

Trying being the key word here -_-



It's pretty close to how I imagine him, and yet both headshots are very different in their own way yet carry all the traits that make Setmi himself.

-pointed chin
-long, pointed nose
-small, narrow eyes
-large nostrils/nares
-small, thin lips
-large protruding ears
-sharp jawline
-high, thin, arched eyebrows
-protruding Adams apple
-sunken eyes
-protruding cheekbones
-skullish sunken face
-long, thin neck
-short, unevenly cut hair with a predominant widows peak
-large straight white teeth with slightly elongated canines, both top and bottom
-small pupils due to light sensitivity

Would someone please be so kind as to:
A) Redline this
B) Critique it all to hell
or
C) Draw what it should look like since I am currently incapable of putting my own freaking character on paper ><

Setmi is not meant to be hot, or sexy, or cute, but rather look rather Mr. Hyde with a sort of charm, kind of like the Beast in Disney's Beauty and the Beast. Don't worry about the scars, I know where they go.

I just seem to suck at making people anorexically thin and unhealthy, which Setmi definately is. >.>

WHERE DO THE BONES AND MUSCLES GOOOOO >.<

Thanks <3

[Rip]

Mrrr, I'm not sure. Mebe kochi could help

[Jasper Sable]

-looks around- Kochi! Your Godly prescence has been summoned!

-sacrifices Rip-

>.>

[Jasper Sable]

Gah! Now I can't draw him at ALL! SAJFljasdfkJDASFKLJDFLK RAWR!

[Rip]

Personally it looks fine to me. xD

[Jasper Sable]

His face is too long from front to back... it looks like his skull is sloped like this - /

And the nose and lips and eye and 'sunken' look are just all wrong -_-

And I hate looking up skinny people because I always get third world country pics and it ends up being depressing :S

Mind you... looking up refs for Setmi's burns turned out some -really- disturbing pics 0.o

And I can't draw ears ><

[Rip]

Try looking on www.gettyimages.com for 'skinny male'.

[Jasper Sable]

Thanks Rip 83 I'll check it out.

Edit: Gah, there's no face shots >< And they're mostly muscular skinny guys >_o

[Rip]

You can get really specific. Try different things.

[Jasper Sable]

tried variations of skinny and man... lots of skinny women, but they just don't have the same defining features a man does. But that's okay. I just used Cedarseeds tutorials on DA to figure it out ^_^ Thanks anyways Rip <3